Please check my grammar in this very short MIND-BOGGLING INTERESTING STORY which I...

The dagger!

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...wrote? In 1994, a student who is very sick and tired of his life decided to run through the park in an afternoon of June to clear his mind with the mundane concerns of life. While running, he saw his neighbor who is a corrupt police officer eating cake instead of doing his job. He also witnessed how his uncle's doctor hit an old dog with a tennis racket just to show how strong he is in front of his friends. He then saw a plumber drinking alcohol and smoking cigarette without a care in the world. He have had enough so he decided to go home. Along the way while crossing an intersection someone called his name so he looked for it but he didn't see who it was and suddenly there's a light, a bright light ready to take away his life. It was a ruckus. Everyone is shouting and panicking. His uncle's doctor who by coincidence see the accident tried to revive him but in the end, he slowly died.

Moral of the story: An apple a day, keeps the doctor away.
 
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