People who know good entertainment! I need your advice! Can you judge this

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melissa

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for me and help with ideas? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p0uHdOEtdsY

This is my short film trailer. I'm trying to improve my skills, and would like some advise on things to change for the future.

Also, I'm working on another film next year and need short film ideas. Have any? Thanks!
the rest of the movie is on youtube!
just search "The Easy Way Out"
it's in parts, or you can search my channel!
 
VERY nice!

Loose the dad in the chair at the beginning, it makes for a to fast and unsmooth cut...

Music is fabulous and just right---> talent

Less Dawson Creek attitude but that's just being young and me being a nag...

Don't waste your talent on booze like most of us do...

Good luck!

X-)
 
that looks sooo awesome!! are you gonna make a real movie?!?! and being an "orchestra dork" (which is not true) i love the suspensful music and the whole plot in general!! it looks so good i hope you make more of the movie. good luck <3
 
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