I've already posted this poem, but i need more opinions. and i know that you dont have to put commas after every line, but i accidentally did it and every first letter is capitialized because it automatically does that on the word program. thanks in advance!
I’m left out in the cold,
Wanting someone to hold,
Didn’t ever think that you could be this cruel.
I’m standing on your doorstep,
Right where I once wept,
And I’m back to where I started once again.
Do you ever take me into consideration?
I’ve stood here waiting and I’m out of patience.
Will you ever see what’s right for me?
Do you ever care, at all, what I’m feeling inside?
Do you ever think, just maybe, that I have feelings I have to hide?
But you never think, at all.
You always put me last,
Now you and I, are the past,
Maybe you should think over what matters most.
You always thought I was honest with you,
But it was my heart you couldn’t see through,
Maybe we just weren’t as close as you thought.
And sometime, late last night,
I realized that the sun is in sight,
Because I’m so much better off, without you.
I’m left out in the cold,
Wanting someone to hold,
Didn’t ever think that you could be this cruel.
I’m standing on your doorstep,
Right where I once wept,
And I’m back to where I started once again.
Do you ever take me into consideration?
I’ve stood here waiting and I’m out of patience.
Will you ever see what’s right for me?
Do you ever care, at all, what I’m feeling inside?
Do you ever think, just maybe, that I have feelings I have to hide?
But you never think, at all.
You always put me last,
Now you and I, are the past,
Maybe you should think over what matters most.
You always thought I was honest with you,
But it was my heart you couldn’t see through,
Maybe we just weren’t as close as you thought.
And sometime, late last night,
I realized that the sun is in sight,
Because I’m so much better off, without you.