Opinions on this poem i wrote called " ever after" please ?

J

Jen

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Valley of the stars.
Exists in minds of dreamers.
Drifting their being upon a mythical plain.
Gazing upon beauty they long to stay.


Knights upon mighty white steeds.
Ride in to save the day.
Swords forged upon horns of unicorns.
Where happy ever after,
happens every day.









Copyright © 2009 Jennifer Bergerson
All Rights Reserved
 
Tremendous
Marvelous
Terrific
Brilliant
Dazzling
Gleaming
Mind Blowing
Wits puffing
Remarkable
Adequately symbolized
Choosy
Passionate
Obsessive
Ardent
Compulsive
Indulgent
Intense
Fervent
Thought-provoking
Fastidious
Avid
Heartfelt
Cordial
Splendid
Jam-packed of sentiments
Genial
Emotional
Submissive

Terms are fewer 2 correspond the fascination exposed in this poem.

I missing from vagueness be grateful for this poem by compassion!!!!

This poem acquires 10/10

Glance frontward to this assists :-))

Yours straightforwardly,
K@TRIN@
 
Tremendous
Marvelous
Terrific
Brilliant
Dazzling
Gleaming
Mind Blowing
Wits puffing
Remarkable
Adequately symbolized
Choosy
Passionate
Obsessive
Ardent
Compulsive
Indulgent
Intense
Fervent
Thought-provoking
Fastidious
Avid
Heartfelt
Cordial
Splendid
Jam-packed of sentiments
Genial
Emotional
Submissive

Terms are fewer 2 correspond the fascination exposed in this poem.

I missing from vagueness be grateful for this poem by compassion!!!!

This poem acquires 10/10

Glance frontward to this assists :-))

Yours straightforwardly,
K@TRIN@
 
Tremendous
Marvelous
Terrific
Brilliant
Dazzling
Gleaming
Mind Blowing
Wits puffing
Remarkable
Adequately symbolized
Choosy
Passionate
Obsessive
Ardent
Compulsive
Indulgent
Intense
Fervent
Thought-provoking
Fastidious
Avid
Heartfelt
Cordial
Splendid
Jam-packed of sentiments
Genial
Emotional
Submissive

Terms are fewer 2 correspond the fascination exposed in this poem.

I missing from vagueness be grateful for this poem by compassion!!!!

This poem acquires 10/10

Glance frontward to this assists :-))

Yours straightforwardly,
K@TRIN@
 
i think you should sit and write a poem that you know no one else will ever read, pretend when you write it you will immediately throw it out....and then post it online and watch the flood of positive feedback. start writing for you and only you, it may not bring success but it will bring satisfaction!
 
Tremendous
Marvelous
Terrific
Brilliant
Dazzling
Gleaming
Mind Blowing
Wits puffing
Remarkable
Adequately symbolized
Choosy
Passionate
Obsessive
Ardent
Compulsive
Indulgent
Intense
Fervent
Thought-provoking
Fastidious
Avid
Heartfelt
Cordial
Splendid
Jam-packed of sentiments
Genial
Emotional
Submissive

Terms are fewer 2 correspond the fascination exposed in this poem.

I missing from vagueness be grateful for this poem by compassion!!!!

This poem acquires 10/10

Glance frontward to this assists :-))

Yours straightforwardly,
K@TRIN@
 
Tremendous
Marvelous
Terrific
Brilliant
Dazzling
Gleaming
Mind Blowing
Wits puffing
Remarkable
Adequately symbolized
Choosy
Passionate
Obsessive
Ardent
Compulsive
Indulgent
Intense
Fervent
Thought-provoking
Fastidious
Avid
Heartfelt
Cordial
Splendid
Jam-packed of sentiments
Genial
Emotional
Submissive

Terms are fewer 2 correspond the fascination exposed in this poem.

I missing from vagueness be grateful for this poem by compassion!!!!

This poem acquires 10/10

Glance frontward to this assists :-))

Yours straightforwardly,
K@TRIN@
 
i think you should sit and write a poem that you know no one else will ever read, pretend when you write it you will immediately throw it out....and then post it online and watch the flood of positive feedback. start writing for you and only you, it may not bring success but it will bring satisfaction!
 
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