opinions on these lyrics??? Please?

Black9

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well my friend and i have been writin lyrics and were gnna be working on songs. opinions would be very nice. and if u have some lyric ideas that would be very appreciated thnx:]
this was insipired one of my best friends. she meant the world to me at the time.


bloodshot eyes from the tears that ive shed,
now that ive lost my friend
i swore id protect her till the end
but i failed and saw her dead
shatterd glass and saw her wrists
held her hand and saw the slits
broken hearted and poisoned lips
i tried so hard to prevent this

i failed, broke our promise
how could i have done this?

i see the shell of the bullet burried deep within her head
i see the bottle of pills, watched as the effects spread
i watched all her life as it seeps from her eyes
losing someone so dear is my my only fear
now its realized, ive no control of tears
flowing like endless rivers, running my eyes dry
yet i still run, crimson tears i bled

no matter how hard i try,
i know ill never get her back
so i saw farewell
and take life in my hands
take in the poison
to say goodbye
 
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