i have..this so far;
As one overly-crowded family car pulled into the campsite, engine loudly buzzing like a lawnmower which had once seen better days, three or four more cars appeared ....(need a good ending to the sentence?)
can anyone help me finish it? i need a word, like showing they came quickly out of nowhere, but putting it more descriptive as that one?
thanks.
As one overly-crowded family car pulled into the campsite, engine loudly buzzing like a lawnmower which had once seen better days, three or four more cars appeared ....(need a good ending to the sentence?)
can anyone help me finish it? i need a word, like showing they came quickly out of nowhere, but putting it more descriptive as that one?
thanks.