One paragraph character description - your opinion?

Hey, guys. This is just a character sketch for a fully fleshed-out character named Scottish.
How do you feel about him?

"Scottish has a tattoo of a horse above his heart, on his chest. It’s a doodle of a horse, and it’s not bigger than a thumb. It’s shown as he’s hanging forward from the door frame, bare-chested but with suspenders nearly covering his nipples, his stomach firm and naked, a trail of red hair disappearing into his pants, his armpit hairs red.
He’s sucking on a lollipop, holding it between his clenched teeth and the wall of his cheek. His hair, curly red, is now combed back and flat, ending with a soft wave at the back of his neck.

On either side of his expressed cheekbones are long pointed sideburns, ending just above the soft hollows of the cheek meat. Under neat red eyebrows, eyes so green and often so piercingly observant they make a person feel so uncomfortable they avert their eyes."

Thanks!
Sorry. TWO paragraphs.
 
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