Okay... so here is what my story is about! PART 2?

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... the water, the way he talks to her, the way he tells her his secrets. But soon something is coming after Kenneth, to punish him for revealing all his secrets..


SPOILERS: Kenneth is a merman, he is one of the few who can change and was sent by Cordelia to kill Naomi, because of her grandfather's killing mermaids background, (in the prolouge you read about a beautiful, black haired, pale skinned, fin thinged on the wall of his cabin when Niamo is 7) But Kenneth and Naomi fall in love and he cannot kill her.
When a mermaid is born, so is a human. The mermaid or merman has whatever the human doesnt (Naomi is impatient, Kenneth completes her)
Kenneth and Naomi soon find out they were meant to be but they come from two seperate worlds.
Kenneth wants to save Naomi because if she dies, so will he.

Thanks for the time, please leave a nice comment or something i could work on, please dont be mean. There is a TON of more cool stuff in this book and the sequel! LOL planning ahead!
yeah its going to be different because the mermaids actually climb onto teh beach and yeah not sure when

prob when its like a full moon or something but they are coming after him

not gonna tell what happens in the end though, it would ruin it
 
its really good!!!i love this story..i like the part where they are meant to be because merman is born at the same time as the human..maybe u could add some sorta danger factor to the story u know..
 
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