okay i finished my song. what do you guys think?

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Big D

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i wrote this song over the past week and now looking for feedback.


Find A Cure

There's something I can't stand about you,
so I no longer love you.
We used to be so strong,
we used to get along.
If only we could,
if only we could find a way,
find a way,
find a way to find a cure.

when we first met,
we just clicked,
everything seemed to fit.
there were some fights and arguments,
but i never thought we'd end up like this.

What ever happened to us?
We used to be so strong,
we used to get along.
If only we could,
if only we could find a way,
find a way,
find a way to find a cure.

I still see the look,
the look in your eyes when I told you this, was our final good-bye.
You were begging me not, not to leave.
Not now,
not ever.

I wish,
we could,
go back,
to the way we were before.
so we,
could be,
still together.

what happened to us?
We used to be so strong,
we used to get along.
If only we could,
if only we could find a way,
find a way,
find a way to find a cure.

I'm through, with you.
because you're not worth-
fighting for.
I'm tired of wasting-
my time on you.
since it's an endless cause.
an endless cause,
to find a cure.

so i'm looking for your thoughts and your feedback to help me improve my song.
 
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