Okay, I am attempting to write after a spell of being blocked. Please C/C?

[lovechild]

I watch the ripples cross the lake;
when the time has come to make
changes, you will know.
I see the shimmer of the sun's rays,
contemplating the many ways
that my soul grows.
I am redeemed in learning
and, as this stone is turning
I am serene at last.
Rushing through in a hurry,
spending nights awake full of worry;
I have put to the past.

I am free.

 

[Richard B]

Hello LC,

This one is on the way to poetry. You've discovered enjambment. Well done.