Ok im writing an action pack book and need ur help?

Andrew

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Ok I have four main characters and im trying to think of good weapons 4 them.
the book is about two brothers who get attack by creatures called shadows, and start developing powers one brother turns evil and joins the shadows, and the other joins an organization that fights shadows the who joins the organization is put in a special that r all also being trained to combat these creatures called shadows. that where I need your help ok
so the brother is part shadow so his physical appearance changes he gets like claws and horns in stuff and can shout blast I got him down pack so next
one character is from Egypt and use to be a thief , and used to be very poor u no the whole sad story. He is very quite and serious he is the leader of there group. He is a great leader and very strong but does not let any one in.
the next character is from Spain and she is a fighter her mom is a kick boxer, and her dad is like Bruce lee. So she is very cocky and loud and won’t let u forget that she is the best at what she dose. she is a black bleat n like every thing and loves to use her fist so I wanted to give he like gullets or something idk
next is a guy from Japan he the smart guy the guy who thinks every thing thru and he Get all A and stuff
lastly is a girl from Italy she is the girly and a bigggg flirt she love boys but when it comes to fighting she is a whole different person she will let u have it ok that all can u help me and thank u 4 reading all of that o and what do u think of the characters

o and if u need more just ask
 
I'm really sorry to say this but I couldn't read anything you just wrote. What about trying to use correct spelling and punctuation and THEN talk to us about this grand story of yours. From what I could decode, it sounds nice. However, if you want anyone to read your story in detail, good writing comes first and then the plot regardless of how action packed it is.
 
uhm. .
try to use the 4 eLements..

wing, fire, earth, water. .

if it's about action
try to use bow and arrow. .

since your fightng with the shadow, try to sue Light. .
kiddin. .

idk. .

thats just my idea. .
 
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