ode to YA answers poetry section?

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mtheoryrules

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crazed dementia
a mouth with a thousand tongues
all fighting for the next word
demanding to be heard
the chasm is a soul song
heaped upon the lake bed
molten from compression
the core is nova
sharked shard pure sharp cold
dense absolute zero
cool
do not stick around
the is a mess up
now hand em over
empty pockets fill the time
with idle worries
and tidal page flood
millions finger fidget flurry
to form an army of solitude
the waste basket
is filled with cyber junk
zap me a line but make sure
it hurts
wasted emotions
or are you moved
but here and there
a jem was flawless
till we cut it on the words
 
You had a nail gun to help you on this one... eh?
I have done my time,
may I be released on good behaviour... or.. hmmmmhm
whatever other grounds you can come up with?
 
Empty pockets fill the time with idle worries I loved this in particular in fact I loved your poem deep thought provoking & honest Kudos
 
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