new poetry. i know its been a while?

[sou chef]

Discovered,
Lost,
Wet.
Darkness...envelopes, consumes, obscures.
Journeying,
Destination unknown,
The only certainty is confusion.
dark, grey, bleak...truthless,
hopeless.
stuck, confused in a dank rainforest.
Where am i?
what have i gotten into?
Lost.
Angry,
Uncontrollable..and confused,
because i can hear nothing,
see nothing,
and feel everything.
I can feel too much,
so much i cant control it or me,
so much i'm lost and confused...and its still dark.

 

[ghena a]

its a really good poem, but there is something missing,you have to add a last line, add someting there ~anyway good luck, want to see more

 

[Samm]

OMG! That is such a good poem! i really dont no wt else 2 say! Luved it!