New poem I wrote. Rate from 1-5?

Andie

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There's a place that I see.
There's no you.
There's no me.
But a sleepy dog sulks in the shade of a tree.

There's a river that runs deep
Near where the sulking dog sleeps
Where the good girls drown
In it's depths they will keep.

A lone farmer lives by
Who cuts wheat for his rye.
Unknowing that day
He most surely will die.

There's a place that I see.
There's no you.
There's no me.
But a sleepy dog sulks in the shade of a tree.
haha. cool.
 
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