new poem i have been working on for a few days ....need help?

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Hello gorgeous
I don’t believe we’ve met
Eyes like yours I would never forget
Hello beautiful
What’s your name?
Hair like yours is making me insane
Bye bye darling
I am glad we’ve met
You made my life, have no regrets

But why does goodbye have to be like this
If u leave like that, I will make my final noise

Say my last good bye’s
The sleepless nights will have been for nothing
I mean you’re something
something special to me

But if I couldn’t even
Make your life living
then what am I good for?
Its not you that deserves to leave like that

Its me










what do u think what u like what u dislliek what does it need
 
This isnt even a poem. its more like a bad song.
"noise?"
Change that.

This sounds like a poem as written by a jock to a hooters waitress.
 
This isnt even a poem. its more like a bad song.
"noise?"
Change that.

This sounds like a poem as written by a jock to a hooters waitress.
 
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