new poem "Delete"...please read and critic if you if you will.?

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Delete:

Sometimes the hardest thing to do,
Is to say ‘goodbye’ and delete you.
When the phone rings, I run
Even though I know we’re done
I can’t put this off any longer,
If I do, it’ll only be harder.

Here goes…

Your Myspace: “are you sure you want to delete this person?”
I know if I don’t, the pain will only worsen.
All your text: “are you sure you want to delete all text?”
If I keep them, I’ll only be more vexed.
Your number: “are you sure you want to delete this contact?”
But if I keep it, how will I react?

There now; I’m almost done, and you’re almost gone.
So I’ll be over you before the next dawn.
So you’ve been deleted, all but one thing,
Only a picture of you still remains.
“are you sure you want to delete him?”
I wait for so long that the screen goes dim.
I click “cancel”, maybe this way is kinder.
And maybe I’ll keep just this one reminder.
 
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