Need help with someone checking my limerick poem?

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chuck

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I would love to help you, however I have no idea what it means. What are you trying to say? If I understand your poem then I would be glad to help you.

Karl
 
I just need it to make it sound a little more wild and experimental style..but don't know how please help

There was a old man shimmering
“His affection” was getting dimmer
No worries got through
Only flurries were true
He got infection during Zimmer
 
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