i have to make a poem. but i'm not good at poetry. please help me make something.
this is what i've made so far. you can e-mail me in [email protected]
"untitled"
Where you stood on sand and scarfed a seaweed
Where nothing else matters besides the feel of freedom
Far from mother and father
Far from stress and school
The numbing of your hand as you write your words
You've unchained yourself into a world of the sea
The sky so blue and the world so yellow
Colours you stand beneath a city
School of fish and you give al your heart to the beach
The splash of water among your face
Rays of sun ilumintating the days
YOu've changed
You've become yourself once again
It doesn't matter if you live forever
You just want to live
And you do
not forever, but til that day
On the beach,
You live.
this poem is nothing. please tell me if it's okay. or something. just say what you need to say!
this is what i've made so far. you can e-mail me in [email protected]
"untitled"
Where you stood on sand and scarfed a seaweed
Where nothing else matters besides the feel of freedom
Far from mother and father
Far from stress and school
The numbing of your hand as you write your words
You've unchained yourself into a world of the sea
The sky so blue and the world so yellow
Colours you stand beneath a city
School of fish and you give al your heart to the beach
The splash of water among your face
Rays of sun ilumintating the days
YOu've changed
You've become yourself once again
It doesn't matter if you live forever
You just want to live
And you do
not forever, but til that day
On the beach,
You live.
this poem is nothing. please tell me if it's okay. or something. just say what you need to say!