Need help with my book, what should happen?

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Jennifer

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Here is the brief outline.

This girl clones herself 6 times. She makes them super good a soccer. (futball) Then they win the soccer Olympics.

So I don't know what should happen next. I think that she should get in trouble but I don't know.
Because of Randy I have to add this.

This girl that clones herself (Raichel) is a bit selfish and doesn't think ahead. Also, I'm young so this book isn't going to be what you think of as a book, it can only be 700 words long anyway.
I like Backwardsmom's idea...
 
Brief? Only thing I perceived was some foolish story of a girl cloning herself to make herself a good soccer player (which seems stupid...why can't she just practice? Where's the point of the story?)

And it's your job as a writer to think of ideas. People don't give them out for you without credit, you know. And so it goes for the Y!A community too.
 
Maybe the 6 clones decide that they don't want the "original" around any more and try to make her "disappear" but she learns about it and then convinces them that she is one of the clones and takes them out one by one.
 
1. They fail the drug test as the steroids used to grow them super fast gives the tests negative results.

2. Someone notices while doing the test that they all six are 'identical twins', and they have to go on the run as human cloning does happen to be illegal.

3. Someone goes after her for the advanced cloning technology (6 clones, grown to match her age & given enhanced abilities...I'm sure some army conspiracy could be made out of that).
 
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