Need help deciding characteristics????????

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Evelyn Crisp

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I am writing a story about three friends who all go to college together
the first one is

Jack, 23- he is on the football team and he is fairly outgoing yet can be a bit of a jerk at times and tends to stick with a certain group of people. He isn't very smart and often tries to pay off others to do his homework for him.

Angie, 23- Happy-go-lucky kind of person, has trouble taking things seriously, gets good grades, very outgoing and friendly to everyone, and often overly trusting.

Danny, 22- I'm not sure about his personality but I plan on making him kind of sarcastic, smart, and judgmental.

anything I should add or take away?

thanks. :)
 
If Angie has trouble taking things seriously, then why does she have good grades?
Other than that:

I think you've done a good job so far with your characters' flaws and gifts. Remember, if the character is too perfect, then he won't seem as realistic to the reader.
 
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