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lexi m

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My novel is appearing to turn out too much like Twilight. I don't want to be known for that, nonetheless get accused of plagiarism. There are a few parts of my novel in which I have decided to change for the better, but I need your help. Please give me some good scenarios that I can replace them with without getting involved with Twilight.
Remember, keep it within the lines of my story.
Here:
-Instead of meeting his parents, Zeke(another intruding werecat) comes after them. Where? What are they doing?
-Instead of him taking her to a meadow-like place, he takes her to an island unseen by mortal eyes. What does it look like? How does he get in?
-On her third day of school, she get's a horrible migraine and faints as she enters class. Without making the scenario like when Bella faints because she sees blood, what should happen next? I already have it planned that she gets a pass out of school, and her drives her home.
That's it, thanks if you answered!
 
Instead of meeting his parents I think maybe the should be on that island you talked about.

I think the island should be jungle like with a giant beautiful waterfall
which he should swim her too.

And back to the first thing. They should be on the island and that Zeke thing should like come after her while the boy is getting her a surpirse and she should fall into the raging river and almost drown.
 
Apparently, Twilight has destroyed creativity.

Why don't you sit down, and think about it for a while? This is your story, we can't really write it for you. Why do you get so much "inspiration," from Twilight? Just write something unique.
 
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