MY POETRY ...........? PLEASE ANSWER?

Bret B

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Ok so ive wrote some poetry and some i personaly think is good. There are some erotic bits in as well. :-

Its the simpleist things

He tossed , I turned, he coughed, i squirmed, he smiled, i dribbled, he held me close like a mother and its child. his sweet colonge smell drove me wild,he thrusted back and forth, i cired with passion,his sense of fashion made my knees weak,he wisperd if i was enyoying the deep penetration, i was so full of lust i didnt dare speak,he filled my hole with so much manly essence, i was so entangled with his presence that , HIV came to stay

If I?

If i told you i loved you, would you say the same?
if i told you i needed you,would you comfort my pain?
if i asked you to help me,would you shift the blame?
if i left without a notice and walked out, would you follow me without a doubt?
if i asked you to promise me that you would always be there, or would u leave me hallow and in despiar?
if i needed a shoulder to cry on, would you show me youre love and effection that when i left the room i had a erection?
if i asked you to marry me, would you take my last name?
if i asked you to hold me tighht, when i woke up would yo still be there in the morining light?
if i asked YOU to trust me on all things, could YOU do it?

depression

Im sitting here alone again,sickening thoughts running through my brain,im laid under my covers of my bed, i just want my self dead
i need to feel close to a man,but i just dont think i possibly can, i need some one to help me figure it out, i need some one to ease my pain without a doubt
im sick of sitting here at home,im tired,weak and all alone,i want to be able to be shown the way to go,but i think ill just sit and cry inder the table when im on my own.

Gay (last one)

I want to be able to say im gay, I want to be able to say im out.
I want to be able to tell people what im about, i want to be able to wake up with my man laid next to me one day
I want to be able to say how i feel, becuase i am the real deal
this is the only life i get, i want to be able to not forget
i want to be able to let my self love and cherish the man i get, i want to be able to say how he makes me WET.
i forgot to say please tell me what you think and whitch is youre favirote
 
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