My poem would like some feedback/suggestions/ratings? any is fine.?

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Any of the three is fine. I would appreciate it.


The thoughts are inside your head.
They torment you as you lay in bed.
From across the room there's a crunching sound.
Blame it on your imagination and don't look around.
Ignorance and disbelief will be your shield and sword.
Together they will save you from your wretched lord.
The creature you saw at the corner of your eye do not acknowledge.
And try to ignore how your heart is jumping out of your ribcage.
This is one thing you would rather not see.
Once you do, to forget it you would plea.
Overlook it and do not let it become real.
For you have your own fate to seal.
So flutter flutter your eyes closed child, and disregard the distant scream.
In the morning you will suspect this was all just your regular recast dream.
 
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