ok for my english class we had to right a poem. i chose death (i dnt no why lol) im in yr 9 and can u tell me if its good or not. i dnt mind constructiv critisism.
Death
Death is a hunter,
Searching for his prey,
Looking for his victims,
To end their day.
Until he finds them,
Ready to die,
And in one swift movement,
Ends their lives.
Death is a tortured soul,
Seeking revenge,
Against the people who can live their lives to the end,
While he is doomed to an eternity of oppression,
He is not free until he completes his mission.
He wraps his cold hands around his victim,
And squeezes until he has killed them.
Death is a monster,
Always having fun,
Striving to kill everybody,
One by one.
He fills the world with blood and gore,
Until there is no one left,
And he can kill no more.
Death
Death is a hunter,
Searching for his prey,
Looking for his victims,
To end their day.
Until he finds them,
Ready to die,
And in one swift movement,
Ends their lives.
Death is a tortured soul,
Seeking revenge,
Against the people who can live their lives to the end,
While he is doomed to an eternity of oppression,
He is not free until he completes his mission.
He wraps his cold hands around his victim,
And squeezes until he has killed them.
Death is a monster,
Always having fun,
Striving to kill everybody,
One by one.
He fills the world with blood and gore,
Until there is no one left,
And he can kill no more.