My first rhyme! Please comment...?

Emms

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But please no rudeness, thanks.

This is the beginning of a story.....


"There is a bear I know who loves to hear the little birds a- singing
who he himself is full of music and has a voice like bells a-ringing.
He loves the lichen and the trees, the water and the mushelroons
He loves the books and deepest thoughts, a night sky full of sparkling moons.
His taste is rich yet it is simple, he seeks the truth, seeks to be wise
He is a learned bear, you know, who prowls the world with wide open eyes.
I love this bear! My life for sure would not be what it is today
Had I not met him on mountains high in lands so far away..."

To be continued.....

Oh, and I purposely broke the meter in the last couple of lines....for emphasis
 
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