my first ever poetry? sound good?

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Time Heals

Many people continue,
Walking that long dark road,
Hoping..wishing, For things to change.

Relationships crumble,
People fall one by one,
Into that black hole called depression.
Tears fall,
hearts break...

Maybe time doesn't heal,
Maybe time leads the weak to suffer longer,
Maybe love is a pot of chance.

will you reach the end of that rainbow?
 
Sounds really good. This is some sad poetry though. But if thats how you like it. I find it hard to believe it's your first poetry. Again, it's really good. Congrats!
 
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