Zach Attebery
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I really loved my friends cat, that have recently died from cancer, and it hurt me bad for a bit. I am now posting this which i have came up from my heart, comments appreciated.
I just want to know do you think this poem is any good?
Is their anything i could improve on?
-Poem I made from Scratch-
To have loved and then said farewell is better than to have never loved at all, Lost cats to the Rainbow bridge, Will always be in your hearts, and the hearts of many they have touched during their lives, and that lives on forever.
"love till the end is without regrets, but not without memory's <3
May All cats rest in peace, Love, and harmony, All the cats are in a better place now.
('Birds sing after a storm , Why can't we?')
Forever, and ever cats are remembered, Just as the cold wind hits us in a cold winter day. They are now a part of us now and forever. One day you two will be united again.In the light of heavens gates.
In the rainbow bridge, Your Companions are Forever young and prosper. Slaughtered cats brought to whole again.. Old cats back to young.. Declawed cats gave their claws, Now they are young again free to play and run in heavens garden of elegant butterfly's and Beautiful gardens, Their is now no Sickness, no Cruelty , and no Deseases. They are thankful and Happy for this place.
So i ask of you all, who own a cat and who are still with you today, give them your simple 20-25 minutes a day, i know humans lead such busy lives, Life and time is not forever and as such Time is to swift for one to wait and it seems life is far to quick and to short for the felines we love. Please spend everyday with your cat as if they were your last and only prayer.
We are always searching friendship of our life-long Companions, and know our spirts are one forever, even as we die young. Don't keep All your love you had for me inside you, Find another young feline and make my spirit live on, sometimes we imagine that our fellow companion is silently scratching at our door.. but it is just a simple illusion, it is simply just the hollow wind against the pained window, old habitats usually cause for more heart ache as the food bowl and water bowl remain untouched as they not had before, so find your self a new friend.. a new companion.. But never forget me.. as your "Best friend"..
"As god said: Watch over this kitten, and one day i will come it might be Tomorrow, or it might be next week or even.. 15 years from now. One day i will come and it will be without warning, Take good care of the cat and love it as your self, untill the day awaits my return"
With love to all Cats in my life, that i care for and all the cats that have been in my friends dying arms, and the cats that have been passed on to the bridge, As the cats final words "My Heart Is Forever Yours.."
Thanks for reading, Zach
I just want to know do you think this poem is any good?
Is their anything i could improve on?
-Poem I made from Scratch-
To have loved and then said farewell is better than to have never loved at all, Lost cats to the Rainbow bridge, Will always be in your hearts, and the hearts of many they have touched during their lives, and that lives on forever.
"love till the end is without regrets, but not without memory's <3
May All cats rest in peace, Love, and harmony, All the cats are in a better place now.
('Birds sing after a storm , Why can't we?')
Forever, and ever cats are remembered, Just as the cold wind hits us in a cold winter day. They are now a part of us now and forever. One day you two will be united again.In the light of heavens gates.
In the rainbow bridge, Your Companions are Forever young and prosper. Slaughtered cats brought to whole again.. Old cats back to young.. Declawed cats gave their claws, Now they are young again free to play and run in heavens garden of elegant butterfly's and Beautiful gardens, Their is now no Sickness, no Cruelty , and no Deseases. They are thankful and Happy for this place.
So i ask of you all, who own a cat and who are still with you today, give them your simple 20-25 minutes a day, i know humans lead such busy lives, Life and time is not forever and as such Time is to swift for one to wait and it seems life is far to quick and to short for the felines we love. Please spend everyday with your cat as if they were your last and only prayer.
We are always searching friendship of our life-long Companions, and know our spirts are one forever, even as we die young. Don't keep All your love you had for me inside you, Find another young feline and make my spirit live on, sometimes we imagine that our fellow companion is silently scratching at our door.. but it is just a simple illusion, it is simply just the hollow wind against the pained window, old habitats usually cause for more heart ache as the food bowl and water bowl remain untouched as they not had before, so find your self a new friend.. a new companion.. But never forget me.. as your "Best friend"..
"As god said: Watch over this kitten, and one day i will come it might be Tomorrow, or it might be next week or even.. 15 years from now. One day i will come and it will be without warning, Take good care of the cat and love it as your self, untill the day awaits my return"
With love to all Cats in my life, that i care for and all the cats that have been in my friends dying arms, and the cats that have been passed on to the bridge, As the cats final words "My Heart Is Forever Yours.."
Thanks for reading, Zach