Ok I have toyed with this old time poem and want to know what you all think of it.. barring in mind I'm a crap poet . is it Ok or rubbish , I'll set the seen I'm a old man writing a letter to you all its about 1818 I think I not good a dates ........Ok this is my letter
My fellow poet's
How art thee today ?
England is in bloom on this fine afternoon,
Swallows in the skies ,O,er the hill's fly, ...Think not of them ...thou hast thy poetry too attend.
I shall sit in most Quiet mood today, and watch full-grown Lambs from hilly brook.
And dancing poppies ,like fresh red blood on crackling fire of flam like wood .
I will sit and dream in England's Beautiful land . and now its time to say good bey
will Earth it's self one day die Oh King of King's America See Ya
,
Alfred , I no , if you read it ones more it gets better
My fellow poet's
How art thee today ?
England is in bloom on this fine afternoon,
Swallows in the skies ,O,er the hill's fly, ...Think not of them ...thou hast thy poetry too attend.
I shall sit in most Quiet mood today, and watch full-grown Lambs from hilly brook.
And dancing poppies ,like fresh red blood on crackling fire of flam like wood .
I will sit and dream in England's Beautiful land . and now its time to say good bey
will Earth it's self one day die Oh King of King's America See Ya
,
Alfred , I no , if you read it ones more it gets better