need alot of editing sorry!!!
Fiasco:
Sunday 9:00am
ring ring…ring ring… wat is that annoying noise? Ring ring….ring ring shut up would you? Ring ring….
Bang! I smashed my arm to one side and felt a painful sensation erupt in my knuckles, at the very same time, and ear-splitting noise came from the direction my arm now faced. My eyes shot open, first I saw my hand, red in the knuckles, but my eyes wondered over to the now empty bedside table that my alarm, used to stand apon, now as I drifted them over toward the wall I saw a kind of mechanical box broken to smithereens, although still recognisable as the once, alarm clock.
Sunday 9:30
jess called. She wants me to meet her at the park, we are going to check out the ‘new boys’ with the rest of the girls ( anna, Naomi and Christie)
“ oh laura your gonna love him his just your type I reckon, but him mine! “
“of course jess, wouldent dream of stealing the book shop guy…”
“good!”
soon after we saw the girls, they were all surrounding something, I couldent tell what it was thoe…
“what are they doing?” I askes jess but she just stared at them with a smirk on her face
“jess? Earth to jess?”
“oh sorry Laura, im listening, but… it’s the twin!!! Oh man! Look laura!”
but as I turned my face towards the boy, he had his back turned, and he disappeared into the shop. All I could tell was his hair was a dark brown (not as dark as mine though) and he wore dark blue coloured skinny leg jeans, with a black hoody.
“ you see him? Ha laura? He was cute, but not like his brother, now him you cant have!”
“ok jess ok. I didn’t see him by the way.”
“Haha, oh laura you funny git, it rimes hahaha”
why am I cursed with the bonqeur ones.
“hey guys!”
“Laura! jess!”
the reunion was a sort of mixture between screams laughs and squeals… all of which was watched by the passers by.
“can I help you ladies?” came a quiet, rich but sort of sweet voice from inside the shop.
We all turned and from the corner of my eye I saw jess go all red.
All the girls just stared at the guy, who I recognised to be Aiden, due to the fact he was wearing a name badge. I was the first to speak
“ oh no we ‘re fine, just checking out the new books, in town… although my friend jess dose want a little help with a book she saw the other day..dont you jess?”
I turned over to jess, only to see her gaping open mouthed at poor Aiden who looked slightly uncomfortable.
“jess?”
I kicked her in the shin
“ouch!”
“wat?” Aiden asked
“ ouch, the book ouch, do you have it?” I asked, thinking if there was one of such…
“jess seemed to have gained control of her gaping and concentrated on what Aiden was saying, rather than how fabuously his lips moved.
“oh yes, very popular book with the girls…”
I couldent believe my ears.
“really? I heard it was good you see, from a friend.” Jess replied in a tight voice.
“oh yes, rite this way, if you may”
for a secound I thought she was going to tell him that his words rimed but I stomped on her foot and her mouth closed.
As jess was taken to the back with Aiden,
Naomi, Christie, anna and I all had a look around the shop. Unlike the other girls who were all transfixed on the boys running the store, I found myself glued to a book, on soccer legends of the past, it wasent like other sport books, it was like a story split between a famous female soccer player , and a famous male one. For both genders to enjoy no doubt. I love reading! Its one of my favourite things to do, except sport, and hanging out with my mates, I don’t know why but I kinda loose myself and cant find my way back until its over, or in my opinion, don’t want to find my way back. I had drifted off to the corner oposet to jess and Aiden, we were separated between to shelves of books. Anna and Christie were at the front pretending to read books, but kept giving glances to the guys out front, playing soccer in the park, everytime a guy scored and took his shirt off or looked at them they would giggle into each other. Whereas Naomi was looking into a book in the first row, with a puzzled look on her face, only when I payed proper attention did I realise she had it upside down. So seing as everyone was busy, I would just stay at the back, up against the wall closest to the staff door, reading about my favourite sport. I was tansfixed, in the book almost, when a golden voice came from the right of me.
“ love that book. One of the best Ive read you know.”
I came out of my reverie in a flash, looking up at the boy now standing next to me, he was the same, boy I saw before but now I was looking at his face, he looked quite different to his hunky brother, with dark brown hair, and a not so big, but somehow still muscular complection, the only real resemblance was the deep green eyes I was looking into. I couldent believe it. I couldent talk. I could only stare. Where did this god come from? In all my life I found the things said by jess, and the girls, just stupid about there fantasies wi
Fiasco:
Sunday 9:00am
ring ring…ring ring… wat is that annoying noise? Ring ring….ring ring shut up would you? Ring ring….
Bang! I smashed my arm to one side and felt a painful sensation erupt in my knuckles, at the very same time, and ear-splitting noise came from the direction my arm now faced. My eyes shot open, first I saw my hand, red in the knuckles, but my eyes wondered over to the now empty bedside table that my alarm, used to stand apon, now as I drifted them over toward the wall I saw a kind of mechanical box broken to smithereens, although still recognisable as the once, alarm clock.
Sunday 9:30
jess called. She wants me to meet her at the park, we are going to check out the ‘new boys’ with the rest of the girls ( anna, Naomi and Christie)
“ oh laura your gonna love him his just your type I reckon, but him mine! “
“of course jess, wouldent dream of stealing the book shop guy…”
“good!”
soon after we saw the girls, they were all surrounding something, I couldent tell what it was thoe…
“what are they doing?” I askes jess but she just stared at them with a smirk on her face
“jess? Earth to jess?”
“oh sorry Laura, im listening, but… it’s the twin!!! Oh man! Look laura!”
but as I turned my face towards the boy, he had his back turned, and he disappeared into the shop. All I could tell was his hair was a dark brown (not as dark as mine though) and he wore dark blue coloured skinny leg jeans, with a black hoody.
“ you see him? Ha laura? He was cute, but not like his brother, now him you cant have!”
“ok jess ok. I didn’t see him by the way.”
“Haha, oh laura you funny git, it rimes hahaha”
why am I cursed with the bonqeur ones.
“hey guys!”
“Laura! jess!”
the reunion was a sort of mixture between screams laughs and squeals… all of which was watched by the passers by.
“can I help you ladies?” came a quiet, rich but sort of sweet voice from inside the shop.
We all turned and from the corner of my eye I saw jess go all red.
All the girls just stared at the guy, who I recognised to be Aiden, due to the fact he was wearing a name badge. I was the first to speak
“ oh no we ‘re fine, just checking out the new books, in town… although my friend jess dose want a little help with a book she saw the other day..dont you jess?”
I turned over to jess, only to see her gaping open mouthed at poor Aiden who looked slightly uncomfortable.
“jess?”
I kicked her in the shin
“ouch!”
“wat?” Aiden asked
“ ouch, the book ouch, do you have it?” I asked, thinking if there was one of such…
“jess seemed to have gained control of her gaping and concentrated on what Aiden was saying, rather than how fabuously his lips moved.
“oh yes, very popular book with the girls…”
I couldent believe my ears.
“really? I heard it was good you see, from a friend.” Jess replied in a tight voice.
“oh yes, rite this way, if you may”
for a secound I thought she was going to tell him that his words rimed but I stomped on her foot and her mouth closed.
As jess was taken to the back with Aiden,
Naomi, Christie, anna and I all had a look around the shop. Unlike the other girls who were all transfixed on the boys running the store, I found myself glued to a book, on soccer legends of the past, it wasent like other sport books, it was like a story split between a famous female soccer player , and a famous male one. For both genders to enjoy no doubt. I love reading! Its one of my favourite things to do, except sport, and hanging out with my mates, I don’t know why but I kinda loose myself and cant find my way back until its over, or in my opinion, don’t want to find my way back. I had drifted off to the corner oposet to jess and Aiden, we were separated between to shelves of books. Anna and Christie were at the front pretending to read books, but kept giving glances to the guys out front, playing soccer in the park, everytime a guy scored and took his shirt off or looked at them they would giggle into each other. Whereas Naomi was looking into a book in the first row, with a puzzled look on her face, only when I payed proper attention did I realise she had it upside down. So seing as everyone was busy, I would just stay at the back, up against the wall closest to the staff door, reading about my favourite sport. I was tansfixed, in the book almost, when a golden voice came from the right of me.
“ love that book. One of the best Ive read you know.”
I came out of my reverie in a flash, looking up at the boy now standing next to me, he was the same, boy I saw before but now I was looking at his face, he looked quite different to his hunky brother, with dark brown hair, and a not so big, but somehow still muscular complection, the only real resemblance was the deep green eyes I was looking into. I couldent believe it. I couldent talk. I could only stare. Where did this god come from? In all my life I found the things said by jess, and the girls, just stupid about there fantasies wi