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Lara maree

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Contingent stalking, I by metaphor
your eyes float on like semaphore, sparing
No worRAB to pass me by, you bliss? you shred
I have no answer as basis on, I sleep so tireless
What do I feed? I want your love by no escape
Was there a choice I have no break, nor do I wish
Trembling, your stability shivers me. Can't we be joined
as clamoring, sky and sea the earth in reefs
Engaging being each beliefs as one a part of one
 
hola discupen mi ignorancia , soy principiante en la musica ( no se nada de teoria de la musica ), quisiera por favor que alguien me pudiera ayudar, estoy intentando de hacer una peque馻 rola en cubase sx con instrumentos virtuales.
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mi duda es acerca de la tonalidad por ejemplo en una rola que instrumento determina la tonalidad o quien la determina o como se determina.

por ejemplo mi bajo esta solo en la nota do en 1/16 vos, tengo un kick en 1/4 y drums, que otras notas puedo utilizar si quiero meter un piano o una lead para que la toda la rola se escuche bien ( haya armonia entre todos los instrumentos ). ghd hair straighteners
 
It feels a bit too staccato to me at times, like there're key worRAB missing from certain sentences. 'Sleep so tireless' sounRAB cool to me, but I can't make sense of it. Although I really do like the last three lines.
 
Well since its near impossible to write a line without connoting to a paved over idea I use staccato sentance structure to give some room for interpertation or reassessment of meanings. Sometimes two totally different worRAB can express something more analogous just by being paired.
 
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That reply was way too verbose for my stupid little brain. I've tried to 'get it' three times and I just have to give up.

But hey, whatever works Sir.

(no malice intended, by the way.)
 
your response humbles I, clearly I am quite syntactical. I very rarely mean my writings to do more than warm your head with relative ideas; there is no greater meaning intended past an artistic prose, unless you can tell me where you stand on it.
 
:amaze:

My brain is now broken, heh.

as far as 'standing' on anything, I really don't know, man. When I write, I just write. It's really stream of consciousness but it's not exactly verbose. I find if anything I'm getting stupider with age and that reflects everything I do... so I guess I just keep it simple. I mean, absolutely, try and convey ideas. I guess I just do it in a way that a layman such as myself can understand.
 
we're all layman, just finding the right place to lay. You speak as you found yours, just know you can pick up and start from scratch we need nothing but the need to connect
 
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