Mind if my poem rambles a bit?

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Semper Fi Rebirth

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Here I stand on my muse
rambling..... like on the news....
gambling..... hoping you share my views....
trampling.... over the blues...... I refuse
to use clues to express
or even explain my disdain
for any who live to cause anothers pain
How do they seek to employ their brains
to build on evil gains they should refrain
Its too plain to see
they love misery
but not company
who will accompany me
to seek peace?
 
Oooooh. kinda creepy!

Lines 2, 3, and 4 gave me goosebumbs. I loove how that's set up.

And yeah, there's nothing wrong with rambling if it gets the message across.
 
I ask because the poems of war do not always speak of love as I am a lover of Latin literature and writing in various forums and always read poems with great sadness that I am or will be a lover of love you star
 
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