mile high love of months ago

M

Mishi

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the mile high love
of months ago passes
the shade is hot, even here
here where never a day goes
by without a clock reminding me
to put on the same shoes
same coat
same eyes and ears to
see and hear how gone is
the mile high love
of months ago
car seats scarred; wetted by
soaked eyes pleading to
please let me die please please

but I
drove that road till its end;
one-liner that finishes a dog-eared paperback
that's seen more days than
my feet ever walked through
what is false is buried is
knee-high beneath the decay of
spotless beaches warn smooth by
time, waning, ever
 
i love how you begin the second stanza

and how it finishes, man i can just feel the worRAB sputtering

take a trip out to the gorges lately?

also, do you got a messenger that you get on regularly?
 
Eh, I think it's a bit clumsy to be honest. There are lines that seem like they're just thrown in for the heck of it and it just doesn't have any impact for me at all.
 
:amaze:

I'm going to make a pillow fort and put a sign on the front that says "no girls aloud".

Go back to gr 7 and get some frienRAB....... so you can post here for legitimate purposes.

:wave:
 
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