May I take a moment to rant? And do you understand?

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Sin

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Whooosh

It hits me like
a brick
Self-proclaimed
poet nay artist

Futile words that hold
meaning only to me
Views that my eyes alone
can envision

The air rushes
from my puffed-out chest
My ink is barely dry
and regret spills forth
from my pen.

MY pen.
A fine pair we make
both delusional
and deceived into

thinking
we could

write
 
You're a good poet ... you know it. (Damn it I rhymed.)

I think what happens is we post poetry (akin - in my mind - to throwing a little piece of your soul into the ether) and some a$$holes come around to step all over it.

Excuse my language, but that's how I feel right now.
 
Sin, you just described what I've been feeling for the past two weeks. I saw this happening as I read it.
Very good indeed.
 
Sounds like both you and your pen can write just fine.
I like how you used poetry to explore your confidence.
Keep writing, you have much to explore for yourself
and all of us out here in love with good poetry.
 
You are lying to yourself again. Your pen does write and write well! We always have self doubt when we post something. A good write.
 
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