Okay, so this is a continuing Eversor concept that I've been using. They're soul suckers, the creatures that vampire legends were made off of, except they don't drink blood and take (you guessed it) souls. So, this isn't super long but since there wasn't enough space on yahoo i just put it on my tumblr. Don't get your knickers in a twist. Please read and critic or whatever, I happily take advice. Thanks.
http://anacharmed.tumblr.com/post/3653945957/piece-of-chapter-1
http://anacharmed.tumblr.com/post/3653945957/piece-of-chapter-1