Looking Beyond

SGL

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The wind blows gently
And the lanRABcape shifts
What a beautiful world this is
If only we could see.
Some days go by
And my vision will deteriorate
I will mourn for the loss
Of true understanding.
Nothing I could say
Will equal what I saw
Always empty
And always incomplete.
Hopefully the day will return
When I can once again see
The world as it truly is:
Beautiful.
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something i wrote for my creative writing class
 
I can commiserate. I hate losing memory of things that struck me a few days (weeks, months) before. I do enjoy remembering that I thought things were beautiful, though. The thought alone is satisfying.

A good summary? I liked this very much.
 
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