Literature - Poetry (Any good)?

Matthew

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Hi, I have to write several poems for a literature assignment. I was wondering what people thought of it so far.

Beyond the Window

Peering out the window, a white flag waves over the grass
The landscape vanishes, covered by all
Children play on top of pearly sheets, making heavenly angels
Beyond the window it begins to fall.

Like a delicate feather brushing the skin of a newborn
Schools become buried and buildings lost
Beginning its fragile descent from the heavens, the materials to create a man
As the world remains covered by this white moss.

It does not speak yet brings so much joy
Many go a life without experiencing such a scene
Like a lamington sprinkled with coconut
It creates an illusion of being in a white magical dream.

Like a cold shower it pours all so gently
And soon we are consumed by something so pure
It chills, yet warms the memories of childhood
Constantly reminded of such a scene from brochures.

To love something so divine
But alas it will not last!
For when spring comes, it loses its call
Beyond the window it does fall.

Can you guess what it is?
Yeah it's snow
 
It's good. I don't know if it's exactly excellent but you're describing snow right? If you aren't then I have no clue what you're talking about.
 
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