B Barbie New member Nov 17, 2010 #1 i am solid i am liquid pulsing blood flow beats in my neck can be heard over my breath over the blue-green seas over you we are solid we are liquid tumbling rain fall beats the surface can be felt over the tide over the blue-green seas over you
i am solid i am liquid pulsing blood flow beats in my neck can be heard over my breath over the blue-green seas over you we are solid we are liquid tumbling rain fall beats the surface can be felt over the tide over the blue-green seas over you
T Thienha New member Nov 18, 2010 #2 It flows very well with no rhyme. I enjoy the Mid line sounRAB throught the poem. It left me kind of wanting more, however my style is quite long.
It flows very well with no rhyme. I enjoy the Mid line sounRAB throught the poem. It left me kind of wanting more, however my style is quite long.
