Let me know what you think about the poems i write when i get bored :)?

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Jazmin

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Like petals falling off a rose
My tears fall one by one,
Slowly drifting to the ground
Until i can cry none.

The steam is usually long
Like the road that i must travel,
But i wish that i could cut is short
And leave behind all the dirt and gravel.

The thorns are short and painful
And can make you shed a tear,
But like most days i live in this life
They are my one and only fear.

The leaves to me mean nothing
But stand out like most little things,
But without them a rose would be plain and simple
Like an angel without her wings.

The most important thing
Is the soil beneath the ground,
Keeping the rose alive and strong
Without making a songle sound.
 
it's amazing!
keep up the good work!
you are so special that you have a talent like that!
 
Thats actually amazing. i honestly love it. and i'm a straight dude :P
seriously it's got amazing images and lots of feeling, makes loads of sense, read it twice lol. xD classic poem. ty lol
 
I tend to stay away from roses unless they're being used in an unheard of or dramatically different way, other than that, you're poem is pretty good.
 
I tend to stay away from roses unless they're being used in an unheard of or dramatically different way, other than that, you're poem is pretty good.
 
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