Last Kiss (poetry - opinions)?

[Sean J]

Take my lips
Caress them with yours
Sync your body with mine
Yes...
Hold it there
Now..
Let's release emotion
Stain my lips
With your tears
Etch your fingerprints
Into my face
Spill your laughter
Against my lips
Envelope it
And seal them
With one last kiss

 

[Moon]

It is important that the first kiss phase go on and complete its mission and it is just as important that in oblivion the last kiss ends.This is the most natural amiable way lifes mission completes successfully.

 

[mushtaq_ahmad43]

It is the same as your first kiss. You have very nicely portrayed your emotions and wanted to "seal your lips with your last kiss." Good Luck