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Ivan

New member
Pull up to the club in my 6.0’s
I aint jockin forces erbody got those
My entourage im followed by so many hoes
I buyin all the dranks cause I got that dough
I burned like a o I keep that purp on the low
These lames come round me when they want that dro
I blow lots of money but it come right back
Domination up and down when I throw it on the track
Im always entertained when im countin all my stacks
Yall give me yo records and I send em right back
 
God no.
Your trying to be one of these new cats who basically ruining hip hop.
Listen to Pac, or listen to JMT, fuck sakes listen to Jay Z.
This be the same shit Soulja Fag is spiting....
 
God no.
Your trying to be one of these new cats who basically ruining hip hop.
Listen to Pac, or listen to JMT, fuck sakes listen to Jay Z.
This be the same shit Soulja Fag is spiting....
 
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