Is this spanish poem sounding right:?

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YoItsTravo

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I am writing a poem for my spanish class. Does this poem sound proper?

Mi nombre es Travis y la situacion es muy transparente.
Yo estoy rebosante y responsable
Yo aprendo Porque yo estoy mucho vivo y en la clase
Pero en la clase de espanol yo estoy impaciente
Por que quiero aprender todo lo que! Yo aprendo estoy no es el solo persona!
 
O.K., I understand what you are trying to say but your words are a little mixed up.
In the first line you say-My name is Travis and the situation is very transparent-you might want ot think of another word instead of transparente
Change:Yo soy rebosante y resposable
I think you are trying to say in the third line that you like to learn,and you are very happy in class.-A mi me gusta aprender porque soy muy alegre en clase.
In the fourth line change estoy to soy.
In the last line you say- Because I want to learn al that! I learn I am not the only person. I really don't know how to change this line because it's a little jumbled- but explain to you spanish teacher what you are trying to say and she/he will be able to translate it!- Hope this helped!
 
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