Classy Mami
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peaceful ambiance which in turn...? "He does the opposite and creates a peaceful ambiance which in turn helps to establish credibility."
Don't worry about not knowing who "he" is... I'm concerned with the word "ambiance" and establishing his credibility... Should it be "helps to establish his credibility" (with an added "his" between establish and credibility) It doesn't sound right to me that's why I didn't include the "his"
Don't worry about not knowing who "he" is... I'm concerned with the word "ambiance" and establishing his credibility... Should it be "helps to establish his credibility" (with an added "his" between establish and credibility) It doesn't sound right to me that's why I didn't include the "his"