Is this sentence correctly written?

  • Thread starter Thread starter crazylo
  • Start date Start date
C

crazylo

Guest
Ok, so in order to go to a trip to tahoe i have to decipher this:

Read Sandy and Vince's Profile by the 17th

that is how the sentence is written and i think that somthing is worng, can somone help me?
 
Not sure what you are asking here. "by the 17th" of what month? Who are Sandy and Vince? Profile should be in lower case. Are these contacts or celebrities or what? Not much to go on here. Sorry.
How else would you decipher a statement like that except to do exactly what it asks? What's the catch?
 
The P in Profile shouldn't be capitalized. I'm not sure, but it also may be a fragment because it is hard to find the subject. Who needs to read the profile? It needs a period at the end, but you might have just forgotten that part. ;)
 
"profile" shouldn't be capitalized.. and are Sandy and Vince sharing a profile? If not, it should say "Read both Sandy's and Vince's profiles by the 17th."
 
Back
Top