Is this scene cheesy/cliché?
I had to write a scene for drama class in under 15 minutes, but I want to change mine because I think it sounds cheesy and predictable. What do you think?
Situation: A couple is having dinner on their anniversary.
Conflict: The girl thinks her boyfriend has been acting weird lately, and she thinks he's cheating on her, so she confronts him.
Resolution: Turns out the boyfriend was nervous because he'd been thinking about proposing to her. So he does, and she says yes.
So..?
I had to write a scene for drama class in under 15 minutes, but I want to change mine because I think it sounds cheesy and predictable. What do you think?
Situation: A couple is having dinner on their anniversary.
Conflict: The girl thinks her boyfriend has been acting weird lately, and she thinks he's cheating on her, so she confronts him.
Resolution: Turns out the boyfriend was nervous because he'd been thinking about proposing to her. So he does, and she says yes.
So..?