is this poetry? i wrote this to get me through some things it helped ...?

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this is how you own my heart
so im givin forgiveness from the very start
it use to be i would fall apart
in control i would hold onto hope
you would let me go
maybe let me grow
but we was so close you never let me roll
so how could i show
that these fibs were so limitless
look at the list im full of **** en innocence
now forbidden im asking n begging for forgiveness
once upon a time i called you my Hines
girl i would die-
if you didn't ride this
eyes so divine **** now you on my mind list
what would i find hits-
shiver n shake a lion about to wake
is ya worth claim or just my mistake
i gotta make haste or my life made wait....
 
poem's don't have to 'qualify' to be a poem. it sounds as much like a poem to me as it does to you. you have expressed your feelings very well. it sounds like a song. i think it is very good, and i can tell that it comes from the heart. no fake.
 
If you want it to be a poem, it is.

In my opinion, the language is a bit poetic and stylistic, so sure, it could be poetry.
 
I think it is more of a song than poetry. . .
But then again, anything can be poetry!!
*smile*

EDIT: Dang, that person above posted right when posted!!! GRRR!!!
 
I think it is more of a song than poetry. . .
But then again, anything can be poetry!!
*smile*

EDIT: Dang, that person above posted right when posted!!! GRRR!!!
 
I think it is more of a song than poetry. . .
But then again, anything can be poetry!!
*smile*

EDIT: Dang, that person above posted right when posted!!! GRRR!!!
 
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