Is This Poem Good? ? ?

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Someone asked to post a hate poem, so I made one myself. How would you rate it? Tell me if it's good or not. Thx.



Take A Breathe,
Hold It In,
Let It Out,

Speak The Truth.


I Hate You
You Never Needed Me,
You Never Loved Me,
You Never Cared For Me,
So Why Should I Care For You?

Here Are Three Words
That Are Coming From My Heart,
I Truly Mean These Last Three Words,
So,
Hear Me Loud

I Hate You
I Never Needed You,
I Never Loved You,
I Never Cared For You.
How does it feel to be un-wanted?
How does it feel to be worthless?

One Last Thing,
Don't Forget it,
Hear My Voice,
I Truly HATE You
 
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