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Open your eyes, for I reminisce,
what could've been, what could've transpired,
you surf my waves, and you played,
these games that opened my love,
fingering lust into mindless fantasies,
basking into the comfort of each other,
intertwining our open hands tightly,
over each other, illuminating,
like zippers, closed, shut, the eye of the wielder,
and I would dance into the rhythm,
of our hearts beating, rapidly, your voice,
whispering like the angel lips,
I hear the radiance, of the dawn, and I shut,
open lips, and open gleaming eyes,
sparkling brightly, noticing everything visually,
picturing a life without you, is like hell for me,
so I shut my eyes, unafraid to open them,
content with being by your side.
 
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