Is this poem good? its about my music?

S

Staccato Legato

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Heres my poem. Im an ametuer keep in mind. Like really this is my first poem.

My Music

Chapped lips against cold mouthpiece,
I inhale deeply, then exhale.
Shapes, patterns, colors combined,
makes my music.
Fingers pumping, abs tensing, mouth clenching,
Achieves my goal.
The reason why I live.
The reason for my being.
Beautiful Music.



Tell me what u think! :)
 
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