Is this poem good be honest. thanks.?

Rico G

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As the sunset sets and the night falls
I go though it with some kind of percevie and only get a certain percentage.
But I need more to get where I want to be
because if I don't i have know I idea what this world has in store for me.
And I hate living life with out a plan
becuase with out one my life is just bland like no meaning.
And I want to be important because with importance people will love me
but without love theres only hate that comes toward me.
I try my best to please everybody but i've learned that you can't please everbody
but nothings impossible so i'll keep on trying
and hope that my words stay perpetual and never vex..
 
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