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Angie

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a. news/boys - an alternative: "News, secrets, and such."
b. ...find out what we must
c. ...meet up to discuss
d. She's my solace, she's my twin,
e. My backbone and my glee.

A truly beautiful poem - one of the best of this kind I've read. You have much talent and your specifications are appropriate. Your perfectionism is admired and appreciated.

I'll continue to try and find words more apt to the context. What do you think so far?
 
Bella

Bella is my BFF,
I love her very much.
We tell each other everything,
Secrets, _______, and such.

Shes always there to help me,
When I need her the most.
She is a faithful freind you see,
Noone can come close.

We call each other all the time,
To__________________________,
And if the answer isnt good,
We___________________________.

I'll never ever leave her,
As I know she won't leave me.
____________________________,
____________________________.

And even when we're far away,
We always stay in touch.
'Cause Bella is my BFF,
I love her very much.

Help.
1. I need a ONE SYLLABLE word to go in the first blank. 2. For the second blank, five syllables, a phrase meaning to see whats up, or going on, or the 411. 3. For the third blank, five syllables again, a phrase having something to do with soothing, cheering up, or helping in a tough situation. And it has to rhyme with number two. 4. As for the fourth and fifth blanks, I need any sentence, that fits the syllables, rhymes with "me", and actually has something to do with the rest of the poem. Thanks so much!
 
a. news/boys - an alternative: "News, secrets, and such."
b. ...find out what we must
c. ...meet up to discuss
d. She's my solace, she's my twin,
e. My backbone and my glee.

A truly beautiful poem - one of the best of this kind I've read. You have much talent and your specifications are appropriate. Your perfectionism is admired and appreciated.

I'll continue to try and find words more apt to the context. What do you think so far?
 
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